Alone

Left what do I do Where do I go you were all I had No thoughts of how to react I'm nothing

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2016 11:34:00 AM

Brittany,, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 5:14:00 PM

BRITTANY, Stopped by to say hello, I enjoyed reading your poem today. FOREVER <3 SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/4/2011 2:49:00 PM

isolation exists in isolation, Brittany, once it is shared it evaporates, nice expressions and keep your creative pen flowing,

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 6/4/2011 5:53:00 AM

You are not nothing, but truly something and someone...but, your poem truly communicates the acute alienation and loneliness and abandonment and hopelessness one might feel in such a situation...a "dark night of the soul"...good work.

Date: 6/3/2011 3:11:00 PM

Hi Brittany, a very powerful poem. Wow!

Ned Flanders

Date: 6/3/2011 10:50:00 AM

Well, this is just another of these i am feeling sorry for myself poems...it means nothing to me but everything to you..you have told me nothing, apart from you are pretty pissed.. if you want an audience on board at least tell us who and why.. then at least i could feel sorry for you. Cheers.