Alone

Alone He needed love Someone to replace her But he never found love again Bereft

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Jslambert Mister Roboto

Date: 4/14/2011 9:50:00 PM

Right on with this little lonesome loner "Alone"--Loud and clear. and nice. ~JS Lambert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 4/14/2011 8:56:00 AM

I must agree with Carolyn! It is always hard to get used to being alone! But especially if one gets older ist will be very difficult to find someone to match. Great write, Jack and I am really flattened that you already ordered a CD with Lotte's voice! I hope you'll like it!!! And I also hope that Sue's cold is better! All the best to both of you! Love, Gert

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/13/2011 12:16:00 PM

Oh my, Jack. This sounds like the story of my life. After a while you get used to being alone, but sometimes you just can't find another mate to match the one you lost. Incredible cinquain and I'm sure it will earn you a spot on the winners' list. Love, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 4/13/2011 11:00:00 AM

Very good Cinquain,jack!Best wishes.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/13/2011 6:34:00 AM

What a beautiful sunny day here at my house. I am so happy to be able to read your awesome poetry this morning Jack. I hope you will enjoy your day and that you find inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/13/2011 12:00:00 AM

This is good cinquain, jack. I sure hope i can think of one and do it well like this.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/12/2011 5:38:00 PM

beautiful expression of a thought, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/12/2011 5:00:00 PM

Oh how awful not to find luv again.. it is there if u search for it luv... enjoyed this deeply felt write luv..

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/12/2011 1:31:00 PM

especially one with a fancy mark on their forehead seen to at least some of us awake

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/12/2011 1:30:00 PM

when you love someone else you would never stoop to speak to someone belittling,lying or abusing the woman you love correct?

Dawn Gordon

Date: 4/12/2011 1:29:00 PM

sorry to hear that...the word replace though I got a weird feeling from, no one is replaceable we are all unique, we all need love, as long as you loved her honestly, decently, and openly and with all the valor that a woman needs, I know I would never speak to someone else belittling or lying about the guy right?...then I can this poem being accurate,,,like he needed love, so she showed him no love at all? or maybe what he thinks love is>

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/12/2011 12:59:00 PM

This one is a gem, you message so clear.. Good luck for Catie's contest Jack ;)

James Foulk

Date: 4/12/2011 12:58:00 PM

how sad. this was a beautiful piece of poetry, enjoyed reading it. Thank you for reading Made in Heaven and for your comment and yes I do love my grandson, he is such a cute little guy. the thing is my daughter has already taken him to quite a few Colorado Rockies Baseball games, in fact last year when he wasone month old she took him to his first one. he is going to be a big Base ball fan.