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Alone

She sits alone feeling sad She on her own feeling bad he had enough and left one day Why did he leave her in this way He has no idea what he has put her through Some may know but very few Would put up with what she had for all those years Many years spent alone shedding tears She wanted so much to be love and respected Is it so much to be expected She did all that she could for him Pampering to his every wimb Is it so very much to ask To have a relationship that lasts All she wanted was to be held tight And cuddled through the night Now she goes out every Friday night looking for love until the morning light She finds herself picking up Men only to the next day to drop Just as quick like a tone of bricks All she wanted them for was a quick fix She thought that it would mend her heart In fact what she did was far from smart So many men do this to women Leave and start a new beginning Not realizing what they have left behind A broken women left as helpless as a child

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 11/19/2008 12:50:00 PM
Fine rhyming and flow... a most sensitive appraisal of how many women are treated by the gruffer sex. ( 'whim' for 'wimb' and 'ton' for tone.') Marvelous emotonal content. Best wishes, Keith
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