Allergy

Itchy, watery eyes Runny nose, sneezing, stuffy Can't breathe rag weed blooms

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Hyle Chu

Date: 8/23/2009 10:48:00 AM

Hate me. I don't have allergies. Want a hanky?

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 8/23/2009 8:55:00 AM

Sara, This is a fantastic Haiku. What a vivid description of allergic conditions. I suffer from Allergy too. So far I have identified two items I am allergic from, banana and peanuts. Believe me, I am so much tempted to have them but can't. The after affects are dreadful. Thanks for your most encouraging comments on my Haiku, buried Hearts. Yes there are trillions of people buried where there are motorways of today and no one knows it. -Mohammad

Gert W. Knop

Date: 8/23/2009 5:52:00 AM

Gosh, Sara, too many are suffering from allergies, me too, although it could be worse. Keep on with your good writing. Gert

Katherine Stella

Date: 8/23/2009 5:06:00 AM

ahhhhhhhhhh choooooooo and bless you for this fantastic job me still smiling now where did someone put my kleenix lol great write sara you capture this right on the money my mom suffered bad from this I only get it when cotton wood trees bloom keep up the great work