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All Within Dreams

All Within Dreams (Poetic End Cap) Mixed with happiness and love Ever so joyful through the years Send with His blessings from above Each day more worthwhile without tears Should unexpected shadows glow With colors splashed upon the scene Each wonder of nature shall show Within a dream, it’s brighter green Now dark faded into dawning Glorious summer greeting day Yet the flowers are still yawning Gracefully the clouds are at play Yearning for flying way up there Endless around the golden moon Naked and without any care Evening heavenly special tune Erich J. Goller Copyright 5.27.2012
Poetic End Cap - Created by Rhoda Galgiani May 27, 2012 Four stanzas 16 lines total - 8 syllables each line The end letter will become the Cap letter at the beginning of the next line - Rhyming poetry form Rhyming sequence: a, c, b, d - e, g, f, h - I, k, j, l - m, o, n, p

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Date: 6/12/2012 9:46:00 PM
The imagery in the last two stanzas was very cute, Erich. flowers yawning. Love it!
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Erich Goller
Date: 6/12/2012 9:59:00 PM
thnk you very much Andrea,I'm glad you liked the poem Hugs!Erich
Date: 5/29/2012 11:33:00 AM
Erich, this is impressive! It flows beautifully like a song. I can hear the music. I have to try this form. I love the challenge of using the last letter as the first in the next line. I'll let you know if I come up with something and will give full credit to Rhonda as you have. How do you know all these wonderfully creative people? Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Erich Goller
Date: 5/29/2012 12:34:00 PM
thank you very much Rhonda, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and style. Have fun with it,Hugs!Erich
Date: 5/29/2012 8:15:00 AM
great poem,nicely written
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Erich Goller
Date: 5/29/2012 8:22:00 AM
Thank you very much Ruchard I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Erich
Date: 5/28/2012 10:50:00 PM
Erich, a very lovely form... all credits go to your collaborators.. thank you for sharing your awesome poem.. have yourself a good night, always :-) LINDA
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Erich Goller
Date: 5/29/2012 7:39:00 AM
thank you very much Detroyer I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich

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