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All This Melts In Your Mouth

All This Melts in Your Mouth The sweet taste of victory blends sweat and tears mellowed over time’s slow cooking flame. Lust’s fragrance lingering on shirt collar and pillow hinting of moist lips slow drying in absence. Slow trickle of passion cleansing love’s palate a teasing bouquet to awaken new tastes. A sunset obscured of a prairie dust evening diffused as it dances to a tumbleweed lead. Last taste of old Summer slowly brought to its knees Cool taste of fresh Autumn exhaled from the trees. Harsh sting of salt air icy brine on the lips dark comfort to lover’s a warm good-night kiss. John G. Lawless contest deadline - 10/31/2015 contest judged - 10/31/2015 submitted to - Trashed #3 poetry contest sponsor - Broken Wings

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Date: 11/10/2015 2:14:00 PM
Hey John, a hearty congratulations on your winning poem in the Trashed #3 contest. Nice to see that BW saw the excellent writing this time around! Well deserved win. Be Blessed, Neva
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Date: 11/10/2015 9:37:00 AM
I like your take on the theme, John. Congrats on your well-deserved win this time around. Sandra
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Date: 11/9/2015 1:20:00 PM
Many congrats on your win in the trashed #3 contest John:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/9/2015 11:05:00 AM
John, Congratulations on your Trashed #3 win. SKAT
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