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All That I Am

All that I am With savour of liberty, rudderless I float in depth of time, Unfolding treasures and rapt of nature, I try to construe laws. Trusting humanity beyond all caste and creed, Waiting for boundaries to say no to war, Friends I live for stay tugged at my heartstrings, my life's tune put to melody. Emotive and impulsive, passion my fiery blood, Agony eats me inside as I drown in my own tears, Materialism doesn't fascinate, introspection at constant stake, I am on a velocious voyage that ends till eternity, To my body and soul's enlightenment. Crazy bunch, Anger crunch, Undeciphered, Complex puzzle, Is all that I am ! Trusted but denied, Honest little wise, Take me kind, In love blind, Is all that I am ! Written July 31st, 2015 For contest "All that you are" by Charlotte Puddifoot

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Date: 8/8/2015 6:57:00 AM
A well-written piece and congrats to your win Dr. Upma! ;-)
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Date: 8/6/2015 7:30:00 PM
This is so honest, candid, and bravely written! Congratulations Dr Upma on this wonderful poem!
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:38:00 AM
Thnx Carrie! Appreciate your kind words!
Date: 8/6/2015 6:25:00 PM
Dr Upma, congratulations on your win, In Charlotte's contest... SKAT
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:39:00 AM
Thanks for ur always kind support Skat!
Date: 8/6/2015 4:50:00 PM
you have shown the reflection of your soul on the calm waters of life, it shines with wisdom..congratulation on your win
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:39:00 AM
Thnx Frederic! Appreciate your kind words!
Date: 8/6/2015 3:03:00 PM
this was one of the highly original entries; deep, introspective and philosophical; the first and last stanzas were particularly good - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/7/2015 12:40:00 AM
Thnx Charlotte! Glad u liked n placed it!
Date: 7/31/2015 8:38:00 PM
This poem put a song into my head that is begging me to write it down, lol.
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Date: 8/7/2015 12:40:00 AM
Thnx a lot Mary!
Date: 7/31/2015 7:18:00 PM
Wonderfully and beautifully written, Dr. Upma! You are all that and more. a 7 and best wishes in the contest. Thanks for visiting my poem....Darlene
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/7/2015 12:40:00 AM
Thnx a lot Darlene!
Date: 7/31/2015 5:45:00 AM
I am so impressed by this absolutely beautiful write my dear Upma! Good luck in the contest... it will do well! Love, Jack xxx
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/7/2015 12:41:00 AM
Appreciate ur kind visit my sweetest friend Jack!Your wishes n it did place!
Date: 7/31/2015 5:41:00 AM
Profound, provoking, philosophical! Wonderful message. A seven from me, Dr. Upma!
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Dr. Upma A. Sharma
Date: 8/7/2015 12:42:00 AM
Thanks a lot Demetrios my good friend! Always look forward to n appreciate ur kind visits!

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