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All of Me In Verse

The song; John Legend's song, makes me feel like loving my lady more and more into the core; borrowing all her sadness; loving her as she is; seeing the goddess in her eyes, though she may be angry at me or hurt. The ambiance of the lyrics and tune makes me feel like getting my whole secrets and self lost into her tender heart, like a star being swallowed by a black-hole Taste of my lady's sweet nature is all I taste, engulfed in the flame of the lyrics......

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Date: 11/30/2014 10:57:00 AM
wonderful imagery - so beautiful a song is playing in my head - many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/1/2014 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Jan! ^_^ I love John Legend's songs. Indeed, he's a legend! ^_^
Date: 11/30/2014 1:05:00 AM
TEDDY, Congratulations, thank you for the support. ~SKAT~
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 12/1/2014 7:21:00 AM
Thank you for your kind applause Skat! You are very much welcome! ^_^
Date: 3/28/2014 8:21:00 PM
SO beautiful. This is a sure win, in my opinion. I took it in another direction. Have not posted it yet. I think I won't make the list!!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 3/29/2014 1:36:00 AM
Thanks for your kind applause Andrea! I can't wait to read your work; what direction did you take? Lol.

Book: Shattered Sighs