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All My Life I'Ve Been Waiting For You - Make Their Jaws Drop

A couple of weeks ago I fell in love OK, I will come clean and I will admit it I’ve finally found the one I’ve been looking for so so long I open the door and you are there All this time you’ve been sitting patiently waiting for me Waiting for me to reach out for you Hold you in my hands so tenderly Undress you and admire your wonderful form Finally to discover your sweet soft center Today I could wait no longer I succumbed to your deep dark charms and I devour you I lick my lips with satisfaction and smile a blissful smile I confess … I ate my final Reece’s Plain chocolate Peanut Butter Cup which has been in the fridge for three weeks 9th September 2014

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Larry Bradfield

Date: 7/14/2016 10:49:00 AM

Well done!Congratulations..Larry

Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2016 12:14:00 PM

Thanks Larry:-) it was great to get this old poem read again:-) hugs Jan xx

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 7/14/2016 2:48:00 AM

Hi Jan. Congrats for your placement with this sweet verse!! ;-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2016 2:51:00 AM

Thanks Teddy I can say one thing for sure those peanut butter cups sure are sweet:-) hugs jan xx

Joyce Johnson

Date: 7/13/2016 5:34:00 PM

Truly a cute one. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Jan Allison
Date: 7/14/2016 2:50:00 AM

Thanks Joyce:-) hugs jan xx

Lu Loo

Date: 7/13/2016 11:42:00 AM

Jan, this is awesome! so creative and clever lady! congrats on your placement lovely Jan :)-luloo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 11:47:00 AM

Thanks LuLoo - I can only get the milk choc ones now and they aren't half as nice as the plain ones:-( hugs jan x

Skat A

Date: 7/12/2016 11:18:00 PM

Hi Jan, Congrats on your "Jaws Dropping win." Love SKAT*ace

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 9:35:00 AM

Thanks for your continued support Skat:-) hugs jan xx

Karam Misra

Date: 7/12/2016 7:56:00 PM

Nice one, Jan. Loading up on sinful pleasures! LOL. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Karam:-) hugs Jan xx

Cindi Rockwell

Date: 7/12/2016 7:55:00 PM

Nice job! We need to indulge in my dark obsession and your love immediately! Congrats!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Cindi:-):-) hugs jan xx

Larry Bradfield

Date: 7/12/2016 6:55:00 PM

Love it! You set that one up beautifully.."a blissful smile" it is, Jan. Congratulations

Jan Allison
Date: 7/13/2016 9:34:00 AM

Thanks Larry I am so delighted to place in the contest:-) hugs jan xx

Stu Buck

Date: 9/25/2014 9:18:00 AM

this made me smile! your writing has a lovely flow to it and is quite often very funny. I have read loads of your stuff now but will just comment on this one as my tablet doesnt like this site very much and its taking ages to do anything!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/25/2014 10:30:00 AM

Thanks Stu - I try and write with humour as much as possible and I am so glad i make you smile - your comment has made my day! Hugs jan xxx

Len Gasun

Date: 9/12/2014 11:33:00 AM

:))) Hmmnn... another beautiful poem and a very delightful one to read my dear friend Jan. I loved it and thoroughly enjoyed. Thumbs up! Thanks sharing and the smiles. I love chocolate as well. May I also have this chance to thank you for your precious time reading my poems & nice comments. I appreciate it so much. Many blessings to you! love lots and big hugs, Leonora

Jan Allison
Date: 9/12/2014 5:54:00 PM

my pleasure to comment on your lovely writes Leonora and thank you for continuing to support me I do appreciate it:-) Hugs jan xx

Brenda Meier-Hans

Date: 9/10/2014 11:03:00 PM

Hahahaha. Good job I wasn't there or it would of been gone. Love love love them. Great idea again Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/11/2014 3:36:00 AM

They are expensive here as of course they are imported but i will get some as an occasional treat:-) Hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/10/2014 12:06:00 PM

this sinful treat tempts me no end, jam.. enjoyed the element of surprise in the end... fab!.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 7:19:00 PM

I love to have a twist at the end Nette so glad you enjoyed my write:-) Hugs Jan xx

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 9/10/2014 11:21:00 AM

Love the sweet write n the chocolate confession too Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 1:03:00 PM

Thanks Dr Sharma:-) hugs Jan xxx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2014 7:55:00 AM

... Three weeks .... a long time to wait ....... Hope you enjoy it :))) - Love it, Jan! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 7:57:00 AM

I was tempted every time I opened the fridge Anne Lise - then i was overcome by desire LOL Hugs Jan xxx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/10/2014 7:28:00 AM

Irresistible chocolate you, sometimes, are sweeter than love and most trustworthy! Wonderful, dear Jean, and so witty!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 7:35:00 AM

Thanks for the lovely comment Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xxx Yes chocolate will NEVER let you down LOL

Vera Duggan

Date: 9/10/2014 1:39:00 AM

Oh dear Jan here I am thinking poor Bob and then you come up with this chocolate, you rotter, great write my dear friend, take care .........Vera.............

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 4:54:00 AM

Thanks Vera hope you had a great break:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 9/10/2014 1:13:00 AM

Haha you're fun sweet lady, thanks for this entrrtaining poem- Charma

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 4:53:00 AM

Thanks Charmaine glad it made you smile Hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/9/2014 7:09:00 PM

ha! very clever, jan! thanks for the smile...

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 4:52:00 AM

thanks for the lovely comment:-) hugs Jan xx

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 9/9/2014 6:58:00 PM

I hate it when you call me Reese's Plain chocolate peanut butter cup and the only reason I was in the fridge for three weeks is because your husband wouldn't leave. Lucky I'm from Canada your fridge is like a heat wave here.

Jan Allison
Date: 9/10/2014 4:51:00 AM

Shhhh Maurice you are simply too HOT so I'd have to keep you in the fridge:-) Hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 9/10/2014 1:11:00 AM

: )

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/9/2014 5:48:00 PM

YUMMY, Lady we need to have a chocolate party or something we need it!

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 5:49:00 PM

Ooohhhh YES! YES! YES! Casarah:-) Hugs Jan xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 9/9/2014 5:44:00 PM

My mouth was watering in anticipation of what you were talking about...hehe....amazing....hugs Tim

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 5:55:00 PM

I may leave it another month before I get some more... can have too much of a good thing LOL Hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 9/9/2014 5:51:00 PM

I'll devour both of them :)

Jan Allison
Date: 9/9/2014 5:47:00 PM

Tim sorry I was naughty and put it was about 'love' and desire rather than personification - but I didn't want to be predictable - I've done well its been sitting there so long tempting me :-) hugs Jan xx