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All In One

Familiar awakenings as when in BEAUTIFUL PARADISE Might be true if heart feels as such when rusty of exercise Lyrics of singing nightingale, embalmed LOVE BUG, were never JUST FOR ME As in rapping of a drum heard everywhere but not for all to see Memories when everything became so much clear Empty handed return from a sailing trip and it was ALL SO REAL To subconscious, what was ALWAYS KNOWN Tightly lidded lest might tarnish the dream gown Not a seasoned candidate to stay afloat for another unwelcomed episode in TIME TRAVEL Missing the nonrefundable emptiness in soul upon loosing the gamble

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Skat A

Date: 10/26/2015 5:37:00 PM

Samiha, I like the poem, I feel a little bit of alliteration. great flow , deep read. SKAT

Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/27/2015 4:18:00 AM

The guitarist, here the competition host, deserves credit for plucking my strings for such a delicious outcome. Bless you

Kp Nunez

Date: 10/14/2015 9:44:00 AM

Beautiful mind behind this write. Awesome last line! Thank you for your earlier visit, Samiha. Nice to meet you! Kim

Samiha Zubair
Date: 10/14/2015 6:50:00 PM

Shaking hands with love is not an easy job i feel. Thanks and keep in touch

Lu Loo

Date: 9/28/2015 8:25:00 PM

*smiles*

Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/29/2015 4:16:00 PM

Thanks and welcome to poetry soup

James Horn

Date: 9/27/2015 7:24:00 PM

If I am ever in a beautiful paradise, it is because you make everything suffice and when I will remain there your beauty is always beyond compare. At you as I so deeply do look, your eyes are like a story book with a message that inspires me; You and I were meant to be.

Samiha Zubair
Date: 9/28/2015 2:04:00 PM

Duped in the rain of passion is the easiest way to survive love