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All Alone On the Shore Road

To whoever finds my letter, or even reads my words I know what to say, but i know I'll never be heard I sit on this shore road, all alone and afraid My exams are a nightmare, can't even make my grades Who can i turn to, where can i go I'm so far behind, the other kids say I'm slow The lure of the shoreline, inviting waters of end What will i find there, for who will i befriend To my mama and papa, i do love you so From your loving daughter, with the waters I'll flow http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/loss-3.php

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Colleen Bono

Date: 12/2/2009 2:46:00 PM

Good but not to inspirational.I still like it.

Audrey Haick

Date: 11/25/2009 6:26:00 PM

Teenage suicide is a phenomenon that is so heartbreaking. This is really a thought-provoking piece. I hope we all are inspired to do our little bit -be a friend to someone. Peace and love, Audrey

James Peranteau

Date: 11/21/2009 7:04:00 PM

Poetic trance mine friend !! The waters are still for those who find comfort in them,...dangerous for those who desire to reside in them ! *smiles* Great poem Sir !!!!! james

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/20/2009 1:32:00 PM

It just can't be that bad... so well written James and so sweet yet intense... good job and interesting theme... luv.. Linda-Marie, P.E.P.S. "Sweetheart"

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 11/20/2009 11:13:00 AM

Dear James, you neeed to save this sad girl... "The lure of the shoreline, inviting waters of end" - a deadly combination. Nice poem again. Hello from California, Iolanda

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/20/2009 11:13:00 AM

NICE..... Well written poem here friend....:JP]

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 11/20/2009 10:38:00 AM

Very sad,,its good to write this letter here,it gets the attention of many parents who always ask more of their kids,sometimes it isnt just between parents and kids,always wanting more of somebody can drive them to the dead end..excellent work,great poet you are--Charma

Sheol Moribund

Date: 11/20/2009 10:08:00 AM

Hello James: This is to let you know that I really found this poem very interesting and good. It was written by you, yet it seems to be written from a female's point of view (from your loving daughter). Anyway, I have sometimes gazed upon the waters and continplated similar thoughts. In fact I almost drowned once. Keep up the great writing: Only the best: Sheol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2009 10:08:00 AM

Sad write. Children and youth can be depressed just like adults and worried down with care. Keep writing. Sara

Marty Owens

Date: 11/20/2009 8:28:00 AM

Very nice poem James...Enjoyed reading today...Marty