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The wind has yet to blow two feathers along the same path or tassel twin snowflakes to the ground Nor will the wind ever see similarity in all the clouds it pushes around The same applies to the twin-less waves it's carried and yet to carry who've crashed and yet to crash upon no two similar grains of sand Amidst all this failure to bring together no two objects alike It's a wonder that finally it's brought together you and me and managed to get it right

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/3/2009 6:35:00 PM
Gerry, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul
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Date: 4/28/2009 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it into the semi finals. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 2/17/2009 12:51:00 PM
Congrats Gerry on the featuring of "Alike." Vince
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Date: 2/16/2009 5:25:00 PM
Nice use of imagery. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 2/16/2009 2:13:00 PM
Gerry, isn't it wonderful how nature can provide images that are so unique. Great poem! Carolyn
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Date: 2/16/2009 11:50:00 AM
I like this one, Gerry, so very cleverly done. The ending is a complete surprise and, of course, makes the poem. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 2/15/2009 9:19:00 PM
Gerry - Well I guess sometimes nature knows us better than we know ourselves - Sounds like you have found peace in the one you love - Congrats on being featured - God Bless, MJ
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