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Hop scotch not Possible with these Skinned knees Bleeding. Fish kisses wiping Away the disparity and Dismissing the Consequence. Admonishment so Wholesome and Irreverent. Buried into the Pillow now Feathers disrobe. ________________________ More works at alexfalls.com

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Date: 4/21/2013 11:08:00 AM
Just checking in on your first poem posted here, excellent effort, friend, and a thorough job!! Jag
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Date: 4/27/2010 7:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Ian. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/27/2010 6:55:00 AM
I always like the childhood reflections, have written so much stuff about kids. This is great! You're in the kids mind and body. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver
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Date: 4/26/2010 11:06:00 AM
Many congratulations on having your poetry featured >> James
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Date: 3/31/2010 7:25:00 PM
yes! I love the freedom! of this art! Ian! I do this too! jimbo
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