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Alex Jordan's World

a roundel One small part of his world of kitschy things, Jordan's unique house on a rock unfurls a red merry-go-round mid angels’ wings - one small part of his world. Chandelier lights, some twenty-thousand, swirl, while a mechanical orchestra pings. Two hundred sixty myriad beasts twirl but nary a single horse rides the rings. Stand back a little, put your mind awhirl, the world's largest indoor carousel brings one small part of his world. *** for images of this Carousel google "House on the Rock, Carousel" it will be worth your time. won first place in nette onclaud's Carousel in Roundel, August 19, 2013 written August 12, 2013

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Date: 8/21/2013 3:26:00 PM
A beautifully imaged visual written with the elegant and breezy feel of being on a carousel. Congratulations on your well deserved win :)
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Date: 6/3/2014 5:52:00 AM
Thank you, Karen, if you are ever in Wisconsin, look it up.
Date: 8/21/2013 4:08:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your winning work..Congrats..Sara
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:51:00 PM
Reason, congratulations in the CAROUSEL IN ROUNDEL contest... SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2013 4:13:00 PM
Wow....congratulations awesome..
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Date: 8/20/2013 1:05:00 PM
Congrats Reason on your top win in the contest!Beautifully written.
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Date: 8/20/2013 8:35:00 AM
I see why Nette chose this one for top spot, congrats!
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Date: 8/19/2013 11:38:00 PM
Readon this is ex...well done and congrats...Seren
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Date: 8/19/2013 10:52:00 PM
Many congrats on your win. A wonderful write.
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Date: 8/19/2013 7:25:00 PM
Congrats on your win. Morgan
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Date: 8/19/2013 6:54:00 PM
I love the unique take you wrote about.....a different carousel ride !!
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Date: 8/19/2013 4:44:00 PM
Reason, Thanks for the wonderful "CAROUSEL" ride.... Congratulations with your winning poem in Nette's contest. always & forever *PD :-)
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Date: 8/19/2013 3:46:00 PM
Very evocative! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 8/19/2013 2:58:00 PM
oops, you WERE top win. Yours tied for first with one other.
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Date: 8/19/2013 2:57:00 PM
aha, I see you came in close to the top with this one!! BIG congrats to you. HOpe others see it too.
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Date: 8/14/2013 11:28:00 PM
So beautiful. And I saw the video on youtube too. You should put this link under your poem: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QgzBDXwmxRQ It makes it a wee bit faster to google!
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