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Air Traffic Control Radar

Blips repeat on man's optic nerve Reflections of each shapely curve The impulse to meet Slows the beat of his feet And to greet the target he'll swerve

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/21/2010 9:46:00 PM
Good one, I think I Met you a while back. Lot of limericks!! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/21/2010 11:15:00 AM
funny, LOL!!
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Date: 2/21/2010 10:33:00 AM
Good use of humor. What a day brightener--has me smiling. The poem flows well. The rhyme works! Thank you for sharing this poem with us and for your kind comments. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 2/21/2010 9:51:00 AM
entertaining, thanks
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