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Agony of Suicide

Death by suicide Death in agony Agony of poison Agony as emotions race Race through organs Race through minds Mind tortured Mind destroyed Child without a mother Child in tears Tears flow Tears remain Remain insecurities Remain fears Fears torment Fears hold captive Captive to separations Captive to uncertainty Uncertainty of life Uncertainty of love Love evaporates Love uplifts Uplifts in thoughts Uplifts in deeds Deeds done Deeds good or bad Bad action Bad examples Examples of adults Examples of illness Illness overwhelms Illness destroys Destroys humble home Destroys reputation Reputation disappears Reputation negative Negative example Negative life Life wiped out Life cut short Short of joy Short of hope Hope disappears Hope not suicide Suicide changed all Suicide annihilated Annihilated All

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Date: 9/15/2015 6:32:00 AM
- All this is part of our life ...... a great poem, Sara! - Best wishes and hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/14/2015 5:13:00 PM
What a well and a beautiful write..... I love how it was constructed and the truth of life within........A.M.
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Date: 9/13/2015 12:53:00 AM
Dear Sara, beautifully constructed Blitz....reader gets the feel of agony and the fear of tarnishing reputation...there are lot of painful emotions in it...expressing through the choice of your words....loads of live, Anu:-)
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Anu Nayak
Date: 9/13/2015 12:54:00 AM
Loads of love*

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