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Against a Browning Hill

Against a browning hill oak trees' bleeding limbs are stretched; some drops release to softly fall some cling to dry encrusted scars. A few short months and we will walk beneath the springing trees marking their swords of thinnest green stabbing at the stars. And so, life seasons make their rounds in nature and in men the flower wilts, the rose is pruned, the leaves must fall again. Everything of lasting worth contains a seed of loss; on young love's throbbing circlet hangs a bitter cross. We will walk life's lanes together, cherishing this pain we share for spring will come tomorrow and bloom on our despair. Copyright, November 11, 2014

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Date: 1/20/2018 2:47:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Faye - very well done, my friend ... blessings to you! :-)
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Date: 1/18/2018 8:54:00 AM
Nicely done Faye, congratulations.
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Date: 1/17/2018 12:05:00 PM
Brilliant Faye, well worth honoring, congratulations...
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Date: 1/16/2018 10:58:00 PM
Wow! Your imagery provoked a strong emotional reaction in me. I honestly felt autumn gather around my shoulders.
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Date: 1/16/2018 7:15:00 PM
What a delightfully pleasant poem. Congrats on your great win, Faye.
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Date: 1/16/2018 7:08:00 AM
beautiful poem sweet Faye :)-luloo
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Date: 1/15/2018 9:10:00 AM
Lovely, quite lovely! Congratulations on your much deserved win!
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Date: 1/15/2018 8:45:00 AM
Beautifully evoked. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 11/11/2014 5:32:00 PM
Very nice, and as Brenda already said, soothing, this poem soothes like the feeling after crying over a lovely sentiment. Very nice job Faye!
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Date: 11/11/2014 4:43:00 PM
A beautiful poem Faye. It just reads so smoothly and soothing. I love it.
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