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Again Rejected

Ohh why?! My life's lullaby! Its not as if I didn't try With all my charms to catch his eye But he just sighed and walked on by. How I wish that he could see The potential soul-mate that is me The way that we could really be Together forever eternally He left me sad and feeling blue My feelings sturred, my anguish true With faded breathe and trembling knees I extend my heart, take it, PLEASE! But for now, I roam, wild and free If destiny is, for us to be Then one day, MY LOVE Will surely find me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 2/25/2016 9:21:00 AM
This is beautiful and creative. Thank you so much for this lovely and useful share....
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Carlene Simpson
Date: 2/26/2016 12:45:00 AM
Thanks Funom.
Date: 2/23/2016 9:18:00 PM
The right one is certainly worth waiting for.
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Carlene Simpson
Date: 2/26/2016 12:44:00 AM
Sure is Richard.
Date: 1/31/2016 11:45:00 PM
Patience is the key Carlene in the meantime guard and protect your heart and God will make a way when you least expect it. Blessings Carl
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Carlene Simpson
Date: 2/26/2016 12:44:00 AM
How is it that i'm just only just seeing this your comment Carl?.... i think i have too much; patience and patients....LOL!
Date: 1/18/2016 11:47:00 AM
I do believe there is someone for everyone, but when you think of the billions of people on this planet finding the right one is like winning the lottery. Keep writing.
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Carlene Simpson
Date: 1/21/2016 7:03:00 AM
Thanks Daniel, point taken!

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