Again - the Shadorma Style

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~Again~ (Double Shadorma) The sun shines Another day arrived Here today The roses bloom The garden smile and laughs its best Sun is shining again In the night The stars glow the sky With their light Then the moon Above sends her message of love To the earth. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January.11.2016

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/11/2016 12:13:00 PM

Good contrast in this one..Way to go for the contest..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2016 6:47:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,Sara,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it:)You're more than welcome!:) Thanks!Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D

Jill Spagnola

Date: 1/11/2016 7:18:00 AM

I enjoyed your pictures leading up to your lovely, complementing stanzas...I'm going to look up Shadorma now! :), jill

Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/14/2016 6:48:00 PM

Thank you ever so kindly,Jill,for stopping by and commenting so beautifully on my poem.I deeply appreciate it:) I hope you did!:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:)D