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After the Election

Flipping through my lists of groceries, I scramble an hour to pull into Walgreen's for candles, herbal tea, foccacia, and... do I have my vintage wine, a cork screw? My fingers grasp a load of zen-like music as my van rolls like a wind under a hammock of stars, guiding me to a cabin miles, miles away for a weekend fling with the self…a quiet revelry of wandering along the grassland— a craving of my appetence, while a universe implodes into one electoral uproar's aftermath. Posted 11/24/2016 After The Elections Contest

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Date: 11/29/2016 2:55:00 PM
sounds like a fine way to spend the post-election days, nette. great ending to your poem...
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Date: 11/29/2016 12:01:00 AM
Unique take on this prompt, Nette! Congrats on your win. Janice
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Date: 11/28/2016 10:49:00 PM
I love the feel of your poem! Not a care in the world as the Universe falls into turmoil over the election! Congrats and thank you for your entry, Nette!
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Date: 11/25/2016 4:09:00 PM
Wonderful poem about what one feels when the electoral college went the wrong way. I really enjoyed the read but I am dreading the next four years.
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Date: 11/24/2016 8:43:00 AM
I want to ride, jam and hide in the cabin with you, election or not. Sounds like a perfect getaway from our heads. I am soothed ... CayCay
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Date: 11/24/2016 6:45:00 AM
What a perfect idea Nette, leave the madness behind! Foccacia made me hungry. :)
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Date: 11/24/2016 1:01:00 AM
Aha, if only this trip would really change things!! Nicely penned, Nette:)
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Date: 11/23/2016 6:42:00 PM
Implodes it does here. We all could stand a weekend. Great write. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 11/23/2016 3:25:00 PM
A weekend fling with the self...is the best place to be at times.Loved this sweet Nette.
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Date: 11/23/2016 2:54:00 PM
Woman, you sure know how to transcend the inanity of life. This grand poem took me away to another place so tranquil and inviting.
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Date: 11/23/2016 2:43:00 PM
To pamper the self and be out of a noisy world is indeed a sanctuary of quiet we all need. Your sway with this impressive poem-- what a vivid scene!
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Date: 11/23/2016 12:42:00 PM
Now why didn't I think of that, there's a Walgreen's right up the street. :) This sounds like a perfect plan Nette. Hopefully when your excursion is over all will have clamed down...probably not though. :) Nicely written and who would have ever thought Walgreen's could be made to sound so beautiful.
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