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After Dark

in your presence where the force of attraction onslaughts like dewdrops when they fall on roses, i long to be. in your eyes where love beckons like a summer night, i want to behold. in your arms where desire besieges like a maiden moon, i can hide. But deep down inside of you where passion and ecstacy are heating up in smoke, .....i want to burn ...................burn ...................burn

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Date: 3/28/2009 2:24:00 PM
great write. . . .lots of passion!
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Date: 3/24/2009 8:27:00 AM
Much passion in this great poem!
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Date: 3/23/2009 7:38:00 AM
What an intelligent, and wonderful poem, indeed you are a poet. Love always, my friend.
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Date: 3/21/2009 5:39:00 AM
i like the descriptive comparisons!! creates a scene so well! ~ Arany
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Date: 3/20/2009 5:38:00 PM
you write so romantically wonderful,glad to hear a new poem from you again,charma
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