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Adventure of the Soul

When I tell I know u don't believe me You walk away and you become confused When I tell you it's nothing but pain you don't believe me You leave and you get hurt But I know deep down that you must learn on your own everyone is not for you So when you reach the valley of tears you may come back and lay with me Tell me all about your experience Then maybe just maybe you'll learn how much I truly love you

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/21/2015 8:36:00 PM

Enniah, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun in this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST in hopes it inspires you in some way. I will enjoy following you and your poetry:) This is a great way to get through the year. Lucky Us, To Have you. Enjoy 2015, with New Poet Friends! @-> LINDA <-@

Skat A

Date: 2/20/2015 10:11:00 PM

Enniah, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Kp Nunez

Date: 2/19/2015 9:23:00 PM

Intriguing, captivating verse, Enniah. A 7. Welcome to PoetrySoup. This is a community of talented, warmhearted and kind souls. Feel free to read and comment on the works of others, that they may know of your presence, hence will be given the opportunity to get to know you and your works too. Hugs and smiles from the thousand isles. :D Kim