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Advancing Years

I sometimes forget advancing years Then a reminder blindsides me Senior discounts, free Tuesdays Sad eyes in my mirror Daily aches and pains Compensations? Little voice Love you Nana

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Allan Koven

Date: 10/31/2013 6:24:00 PM

I understand completely. Becoming older. Looking in the mirror...all reminders of our mortality. Well penned. Allan

Skat A

Date: 10/23/2013 8:33:00 PM

Barbara, awesome Nonet form :) congrats... Love ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/22/2013 10:28:00 PM

Barbara, love this one... CONGRATULATIONS... XOX~ LINDA

Karen Anglesey

Date: 10/21/2013 5:48:00 PM

Lovely vision of old age captured perfectly in this Nonet. Congrats on your win :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 10/21/2013 10:21:00 AM

So sweet...Congrats on your winning nonet, Barbara! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/20/2013 9:00:00 AM

This is awesome work!! No wonder it is in the winners’ list..Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/19/2013 1:46:00 AM

what a sweet end to those nasty aches and pains. Congrats for your win.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/18/2013 6:33:00 AM

Congrats on the win in my contest, Barbara

Joseph May

Date: 10/2/2013 3:11:00 PM

I like this one ...very nicely penned BG