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Adrift In July

Born in July, I’m a water sign, so the water lily is an appropriate flower. Adrift o’er a crystal blue spring, I recline; white lilies surround me in the midday hour. Rejuvenation, serenity linked to flower power. Tiny fish below nibble at my birthstone; the ruby’s sparkling shine lures them. Midst the red, white and blue all my cares have flown. Grinning, I see growing interest in my ring’s gem -- perhaps I’ll float with fish and flowers throughout the p.m. *Written January 16 for Tracie’s “Flowers and Stones” contest

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Date: 1/21/2012 5:49:00 PM
this poem has such a sultry feel to it, perfectly capturing those lazy, midsummer days...congrats on your win carolyn, hope you are doing ok :-)
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Date: 1/20/2012 3:48:00 PM
Lovely write, my friend. Beautiful last line
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Date: 1/19/2012 1:48:00 PM
Love to "float with the fish and flowers." Only a Florida poet could have written this one. Ah, yes, asleep in the deep. Love, daver
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Date: 1/19/2012 8:27:00 AM
Nicely done, incorporating both your flower and stone. Congratulations Carolyn
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Date: 1/19/2012 7:59:00 AM
Congratulations on the win for your poem in Tracie's "~Flowers or Stones~" contest Carolyn. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/19/2012 7:00:00 AM
This poem has such a relaxing feel to it. Enjoyed !! Congrats on the win !!
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Date: 1/18/2012 8:53:00 AM
I like the rhythm here, good luck in the contest. harry
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Date: 1/18/2012 1:36:00 AM
Very nice write on your birth flower and stone.I think your birth date is 16th of July.Best wishes.
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Date: 1/17/2012 5:26:00 PM
Really flowing Carolyn,a rich word display..)
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Date: 1/17/2012 4:45:00 PM
Nice and fantastic write Carolyn...us fellow July people got to stick together and defend the ruby as the best stone! I'm July 14th, and my brother is July 10th! Which day is yours?! My ex is July 29th but we don't talk about that, ha ha! Thanks for the great work here, I thoroughly enjoyed reading it tonight! Awesome job!!
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