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Adrenaline

veins flow scamper down damp slopes energy threatens overflow demanding unsustainable wages but we acquiesce because veins take up arms pupils quit school basking; enlightened euphoria becomes low hanging fruit the banners will read PAIN BANISHED UTOPIA FINISHED all this while we stand atop a bloodied hill and scream triumphant at gunpowder sky

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Date: 1/19/2016 12:44:00 PM
DYLAN, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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Date: 9/26/2015 12:15:00 AM
A splendidly eloquent demonstration of human hypocrisy:), jill peace...
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Dylan Wong
Date: 9/26/2015 1:45:00 AM
Hahaha thank you! I'd like to know how you interpreted my poem! Could you elaborate?

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