Adopted Swan

Lone swan on the lake Surrounded by Mallard Ducks Hatched by their mother

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Tim Ryerson

Date: 11/10/2009 2:10:00 AM

Whether true of the ugly duckling...stilll cleverly done! (don't tell...keep us guessin'!) - Tim

James Fraser

Date: 11/3/2009 1:17:00 PM

We don't see many poems about ducks on the Soup, i have a note in my notes to write one soon >> nice poem Sara >> James

Gert W. Knop

Date: 11/3/2009 1:58:00 AM

That must be true, isn't it Sara? Thank you for commentig "Star-Dreams". Have a nice week. Kind regards, Gert

Jessica Arteaga

Date: 11/2/2009 2:48:00 PM

that sounds lovely if it's true :D

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 11/2/2009 2:32:00 PM

really or a hoax? keep sharing, have a good night.

Adell Foster

Date: 11/2/2009 2:30:00 PM

Excellent imagry form and flow it is a pleasure to have read such a delightful haiku. I thank you Sara for sharing the read and for yoru welcomed comments as well :-) God Bless, Always, Adell

Matthew Anish

Date: 11/2/2009 1:17:00 PM

Lovely scene you paint with this haiku. Did you ever see the PBS series "The Life of Birds"? Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 11/2/2009 9:27:00 AM

Lovely poem Sara. :) thanks for your comment also... and The size of an Atom... so that if we can't reach it... it's within us anyway. :) I wasn't sure you saw that... Hugs and much love my friend.

John Freeman

Date: 11/2/2009 8:08:00 AM

The swan, the ugly duckling type. Smile, Sincerely, Love, Moses

Jared Pickett

Date: 11/2/2009 7:19:00 AM

Anything and everything huh.... Great vision Sara.....:JP]