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i see you sitting there coward in a corner your inner circle of friends do they comfort you when your thoughts bend? does your mind snap like that band against your arm? the needle's pain, is it the same as what haunts you, or taunts you to crave that drug? you laugh, but you bleed again again...again... ...i bleed the same my mind bends and i seek relief among my circle of friends i snap my fingers grab my pen grasp reality relive the pain seek comfort and bleed... poetry again...again... i laugh

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/10/2013 11:56:00 AM
Very intense. I enjoyed it.
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Date: 8/31/2013 9:59:00 PM
Moved again by reading this one.
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Date: 11/20/2012 7:16:00 PM
Ahh...Yesssss. Bleed poetry....Nice!
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Date: 11/8/2012 9:00:00 AM
This is a classic, lady, a real classic, told as it is, does not get much better then that...you are a gem....
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Date: 11/5/2012 12:20:00 PM
COOL INTROSPECTIVE LOVE YOUR POETRY ARE YOU FROM THE UNIKED KINGDOM JUST WONDERED ALSO DID YOU GET MY SOUP XX DAVIDSCOTT THANKS FOR COMMENTS ON MINE
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Date: 11/4/2012 8:16:00 AM
I am glad your drug is poetry, it possess healing properties with each injection. Not always your own but the people who are blessed to read what has been bled onto the page. Very impactful poem, worth pondering.
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Date: 11/3/2012 7:24:00 PM
enjoyed your poem, love elizabeth
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