Adam's Rib

Adam's rib genetically engineered -- Eve's birth Ó November 27, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen THAT MIGHT BE TOO SUBJECTIVE FOR HAIKU FORM. Here's another go at the same idea...trying to learn the form! the Bible states God made Eve from Adam – genetic engineering I have been told that once I say that the Bible States, it moves away from a real image because the bible doesn't talk and haiku is supposted to be objective and real. It becomes subjective at this point. On the good side, it does have two distinct gramatical parts. I am STILL WORKING ON MAKING IT A TRUE HAIKU... Here's another go at it! >>>>> Holding my Bible Thinking on engineered genes – Eve from Adam’s rib Ó November 28, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen This might not work because the idea of Eve being created from Adam's rib is a story that might be a fantasy according to many. So...still working on it! OR maybe this will work >>> holding my Bible pondering engineered genes— exhume his rib Ó November 28, 2011 Dane Smith-Johnsen I have been told that pondering is subjective...but I am using it as an the act of pondering in this instance...hoping it will fit the form. exhume is rib is a possible action and referrs to one person...hoping it will take people back to biblical thoughts of Adam and still fit in the haiku form. WAITING TO HEAR as I continue to learn that Haiku "ain't" as easy as it looks! note: the first one fits the form, but I am told it doesn't meet haiku requirements.