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Your laxity will encourage the pirate Do not go in slumber, act, act, act Crying over your destiny will not help If this doesn’t work, do that.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 12/9/2009 9:33:00 AM
So much truth in your words. Laxity allows the lion to take over the den. This is a timeless message. Thank you for sharing it and for your kind comment. Keep on writing!! Karen
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Date: 12/7/2009 8:54:00 AM
Great poem, I wrote a poem called Destiny, love Simone
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