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Acid Rain - For Contest

Acid Rain How quickly the soothing sound of raindrops turned to bitter trickles dripping from the black umbrella onto our hearts. John G. Lawless 8/26/2015 submitted to – Rain and Dark, Isolated Places – Poetry Contest

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Date: 8/26/2015 11:25:00 PM
Whoa...wait, what? How did you...that was just...wait, what!? I don't know what trickery this is, but I REALLY like it. This is off to my fave list.
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Date: 8/26/2015 9:25:00 PM
This is terrific. I am a fan of saying big things in few words..I expect this to do wel in the contest. BG
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