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Aching Love

ACHING LOVE Your love, Sharper than a double-edged Sword, Cut my aching heart in two, And now Each part, twice is suffering For you! © Demetrios Trifiatis 13 MAY 2013

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2013 2:28:00 PM

I hope just a poetic work and not life for that would be painful..Thanks for the visit to my work..Sara

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/15/2013 2:33:00 PM

Yes, Sara it is just poetic work! Thank you for your concern!

Sasha Maharaj

Date: 5/14/2013 3:28:00 AM

Very Deep and well written capturing the very essence of a broken heart :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 3:52:00 AM

Thank you again my dear Sasha. You are right!

Manel Gunatillake

Date: 5/14/2013 2:37:00 AM

Hilarious. Need to get it stitched back Strong feeling of love. Hugs Manelcbc

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/14/2013 3:23:00 AM

Thank you my dear Manel! You know, of course the best way of stitching: To win her over!

Judy Konos

Date: 5/13/2013 10:06:00 AM

C'MON Dimitri...get in the Bacchus grape contest...You can write a Haiku, you can write anything...Just use the 5-7-5 syllable count

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/13/2013 10:22:00 AM

My dear Judy, I write for the love of writing! To be honest, I do not know how to do it! It seems the whole process is very complicated! Thank you though!

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/13/2013 5:49:00 AM

Wow, such sadness within this amazing write my friend! I truly loved reading this incredible poem this morning! What a painful piece, such a magnificent poem, Great Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/13/2013 8:20:00 AM

Thank you my friend for your comment!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/13/2013 5:13:00 AM

Favorites, Demetri, my dear poet! This is an amazing write of intense depth. 7

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 5/13/2013 6:25:00 AM

Thank you my Mediterranean counterpart!