Aces

With three aces in my hand, I raise the stakes looking dumb under bloody lights-- packing a Hold- Em win! Something With Impact Contest Franco Gonza---12.20.2015 20 words

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 12/23/2015 3:31:00 AM

Hi Franco. Glad to see you've gambled your way to the 2nd list! I wasn't lucky with no.5, lolest. Congrats for your #2 WIN in the contest! ;-)

Caycay Jennings

Date: 12/20/2015 2:21:00 PM

This could have even more impact that the reader imagines if you had bet the right amount of money! I enjoyed your clever 20 words. Congratulations ... CayCay

Faye Gibson

Date: 12/20/2015 11:09:00 AM

Congratulations on your top win, Franco.

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 10:54:00 AM

Franco, nice win. SKAT

Nette Onclaud

Date: 12/20/2015 5:39:00 AM

wow, very smart and right on the dot, franco... big congrats and thanks for supporting my contest... huggs