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Abyss

Skulls on the wall of this dark abyss Forever looking for the end Suffocate diminished air O' endless pit of doom Why do you insist Upon making Me suffer? Please help Me!

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Date: 9/23/2009 10:57:00 AM
i peer unto the hole in deep and hear a sad younge man weep breaks my heart in two i feel i must help him out of there o endless pit of doom i plead let him come climbing to me and ill shine upon his brow the light of the moon thats shinning now let me help him please me let me
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