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A is for apathetic, “We all know you are!” B is for b*tching, “Why can’t we have three cars?” U is for the umbilical cord, you’ve never cut from Ma. N is for neutral, “You've no guts to take a stand.” D is for dependent, “You'll always need a hand!” A is for angry, “Well, what else could you be?” N is for nostalgia, cause in the past you’re free. C is for all you children, who think they run the show.” E is for euthanasia, how else could you get our dough. And, all that forms abundance, In case you could not tell? Or went to school in Texas? And never learned to spell.

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Date: 5/2/2015 9:06:00 PM
Wonderful piece,Debbie.Congrats on your superb win...light and love..
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Date: 4/30/2015 10:15:00 PM
N, E and the last stanza, funnny! I'm still smiling, congrats!
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Date: 4/30/2015 6:44:00 PM
DEBBIE. Congratulations on your well-deserved win. SKAT love
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 4/30/2015 7:36:00 PM
thank you Linda
Date: 4/25/2015 11:32:00 PM
nice win. PD
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Date: 4/22/2015 9:30:00 PM
Congratulations on a great win.
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:00:00 PM
abundantly funny Debbie congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/22/2015 2:08:00 PM
I love this humorous write, :) a 7 and congratulations on your wonderful win. Blessings eve
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Date: 4/22/2015 10:25:00 AM
Love this, Debbie! Funny, yet true and sad at the same time. Congrats on your win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 4/22/2015 7:18:00 AM
Nicely done Debbie, congrats!
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Date: 11/30/2012 6:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Francine's "Humor Me" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 11/19/2012 2:36:00 PM
Dear lady, the smiles and all fit you well..... congratulations with your poem... always~ :-) PD
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Date: 11/18/2012 11:01:00 AM
LOL Sounds like my home. Congratulations on a great win.
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Date: 11/18/2012 10:20:00 AM
LIke a kind of Thanksgiving list, except doesn't work for the Thanksgiving contest because it spells out abundance. hahaha. Congrats on your win, debs.
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Date: 11/18/2012 8:29:00 AM
An abundance of congratulations dear lady .
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Date: 11/18/2012 6:57:00 AM
An 'abundance' of funny stuff cher!...Congratulations of course - Tim
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Debbie Guzzi
Date: 11/18/2012 7:16:00 AM
yup..too bad so much of it's true and and I suppose I should pick on Poor Ole George Bush...but he made it so easy!
Date: 11/18/2012 5:01:00 AM
LOL Debbie, great write ....Seren
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Date: 11/17/2012 10:24:00 PM
congrats on your third place win in the contest Debbie
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