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abstract masterpiece star-spangled strokes of color waltz around heaven Written Feb. 21st . 2016 for “Instant Telegram - Poetry Contest.”

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Date: 4/10/2017 2:33:00 PM
Very nice, Haiku. Well done, Emile! (Loved the picture, too)!
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Date: 4/10/2017 7:11:00 PM
Thanks John, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.
Date: 2/26/2016 11:19:00 AM
Truly an abstract of nature's art . Great haiku a7.
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Date: 2/26/2016 12:35:00 PM
Thanks again Eve, you have brought a smile to my day, and I appreciate it. Emile.
Date: 2/23/2016 12:01:00 AM
Nice haiku, Emile. Not everyone that writes them knows that you're supposed to do u-turn or "surprise" in the last line, and you did just that. The aurora borealis really is quite abstract and I liked your sentimental patriotic touch in the second line. Maybe one of these days I'll get to see them for myself. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 2/23/2016 9:07:00 AM
Thanks Timothy, I live in Toronto, Canada and I have seen the aurora several time... they are breath taking, I appreciate your comments and compliments. Emile.
Date: 2/21/2016 12:48:00 PM
Spectacular haiku, i see this one scoring high in the contest! Your words just go prefect with the image! well done :)
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Date: 2/21/2016 2:39:00 PM
Thanks Sandra, your comments are always appreciated. Emile.
Date: 2/21/2016 11:08:00 AM
Did you take the picture Emile? Your poem is an excellent pairing!
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Date: 2/21/2016 11:22:00 AM
Thanks Richard, no the image was supplied in the contest, I appreciate your visit. Emile.
Date: 2/21/2016 10:28:00 AM
Amazing....Loved it. How do you do it. So effortless, my dear. :)
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Date: 2/21/2016 11:00:00 AM
Thanks Eileen, you have brought a smile to my day. Emile.

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