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Absorbing

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Absorbing

I saw you today On this day I feel new No longer blue, or sad or any of those emotions I sometimes have There was some forgiveness, in your voice Those words danced on the lobes of my ears I was quiet too the moment absorbing Then the tears You said, I believe you

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  1. Date: 7/17/2011 10:44:00 PM
    I saw you today. Nice poem.bl

  1. Date: 7/9/2011 5:26:00 AM
    a great emotional poem...full of sentiments and such a wonderful set of words....*_*junjun