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God who pardons sin I knock , ask, and you answered. My sins are many Sins are a revolt against you and I desire to accept Your will I humbly come for absolution of my sins I have committed let your glory fill , show me to be merciful, strengthen my body a fault of holding pain against unforgiving souls, please forgive me I desire to kneel humble myself before You not sin against Thee 8/17/2016 Contest Name: Forgiveness Senryu Sponsored by: Laura Loo Senryu (also called human haiku) is an unrhymed Japanese verse consisting of three unrhymed lines of five, seven, and five syllables (5, 7, 5) or 17 syllables in all. using; http://www.howmanysyllables.com/poem_syllable_counter_workshop/index

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Date: 8/26/2016 3:10:00 AM
Very nice dear Eve....
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Date: 8/23/2016 1:03:00 PM
Heartfelt plea to the Lord,loved it Eve!
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Date: 8/23/2016 1:00:00 PM
Lovely piece,Eve...Congrats on your win..
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Date: 8/22/2016 11:32:00 PM
A lovely message, Eve. BIG congrats for the win
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Date: 8/22/2016 4:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Eve.
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:54:00 AM
Afzal, thank you Hugs Eve
Date: 8/22/2016 2:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your second place win Eve! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:53:00 AM
Connie, thank you so very much hugs dear friend
Date: 8/21/2016 5:07:00 PM
Eve, your poem is a very inspiring 'forgiveness' Senryu. Congratulations on your 2nd Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thank you, Sandra, blessing to you dear friend. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/21/2016 1:57:00 PM
Congratulations on a lovely prayer and a well deserved win. Great senryu.
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:50:00 AM
Thank you, Janis Hugs Eve
Date: 8/21/2016 12:31:00 PM
A lovely prayer Eve.
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:49:00 AM
James, thank you . Hugs Eve
Date: 8/21/2016 12:03:00 PM
Enjoy this lovely poem full of live and understanding, Louis,
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:42:00 AM
Louis, thank you :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 8/21/2016 10:41:00 AM
Eve, I can only hope everyone can kneel before the Lord and ask for a pardon...congrats on your placement and thank you very much for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
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Date: 8/21/2016 1:25:00 PM
Thank you, Very honored . Hugs Eve
Date: 8/19/2016 11:29:00 PM
Beautiful, although its so hard for me to imagine you and the word sin together!!!! Hugs!!!
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Date: 8/20/2016 9:27:00 AM
Thank you, Arthur, that is the kindest words I have overheard. I try not to but we are only human. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/19/2016 6:14:00 AM
A lovely inspiring prayer for forgiveness:)
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:48:00 AM
Thank you, Jo, bless you :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 8/19/2016 3:48:00 AM
Your entry shines with divine light Eve. I really hope this lovely set takes top honors! 7 ; )
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:46:00 AM
Thank you, Connie, bless you,. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/19/2016 1:46:00 AM
Awesome verse on forgiveness, Eve. God rewards the humble heart.
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:45:00 AM
Thank you,Andrea :-) Hugs Eve
Date: 8/18/2016 10:00:00 PM
Beautiful! simply beautiful! Eve...I bow...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:44:00 AM
Thank you, ^WW^, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/18/2016 3:20:00 PM
feling wonderful with your sense of atonement, eve... your spirit sines!..huggs
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Date: 8/22/2016 10:43:00 AM
Thank you, Nette, Hugs Eve
Date: 8/18/2016 10:46:00 AM
A very nice collection... hugs
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Date: 8/18/2016 12:49:00 PM
thank you, Casarah, love seeing you hugs dear friend
Date: 8/18/2016 5:58:00 AM
Loved the write and good luck in the contest.
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Date: 8/18/2016 12:51:00 PM
Thank you, Ronald, so much for the compliment and the good luck. Hugs Eve

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