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Above The Clouds

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Above The Clouds

High up here looking down
I see shapes all wondrous
castles floating like dreams
paths leading hither and tither

Statues of Mysterious things
not seen below the cloud line
everywhere you turn and look
another little surprise awaits

Peace here reigns supreme
no wars, Crimes or nightmares
look down see people scurrying
from place to dreary place

Up here above the clouds
life has an extra zing to it
any fancy you could wish
let your imagination run rife

Contest: Above The Clouds    written 06/12/2013

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  1. Date: 6/17/2013 2:58:00 AM
    Nice poem, Shadow, I enjoyed reading it. :)

    Wilderson Avatar Kate Wilderson
    Date: 6/17/2013 5:26:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks Shadow, I enjoyed you're poems too. I appreciate the feedback that you gave!
    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/17/2013 4:32:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Kate hi ty so much for your time I love your poems Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/15/2013 12:21:00 PM
    You paint a very pleasant picture with your words, for a few seconds I was there :). Very much enjoyed.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/15/2013 4:19:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Gary glad it transported you ty for sparing time to read it Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/13/2013 1:16:00 AM
    Lovely my dear,all the best with the contest.

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    dearest friend I appreciate your comment and wishes gl to you too love Shadow xox
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 7:45:00 PM
    i wish i could have rode a plane so i could feel whats its like to be up in the sky. above in the clouds. Good luck with this entry Shadow

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:27:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Nato ty I have been up in a glider its another world gl to you Shadow
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 4:35:00 PM
    Very nice......good luck.....:-)

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/13/2013 4:25:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Donna ty for visiting and luck glad you like it Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 2:56:00 PM
    ahhh, yes, it would be so peaceful up there. I remember being "In" a cloud when I was up at the statue of Christ in Rio de Janeiro!! from the streets below it was a cloud but inside it, just not as bright as the rest of the day!

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/12/2013 3:47:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    how lovely it seems wonderful doesn't it. I can remember twice being above the clouds Mt Kilimanjaro as a teenager and Exmoor a few years ago. tnx for stopping in Shadow x
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:45:00 PM
    Great imaginaiton describing life through maybe a hot air balloon, a dandelion seed or being in a glider..Enjoyed floating on the air with you..Your presence at my work was encouraging...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/12/2013 2:40:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Sara I love your poems and have added to favs ty for reading mine appreciated Shadow
  1. Date: 6/12/2013 1:28:00 PM
    sounds idyllic Shadow xx

    Hamilton Avatar Shadow Hamilton
    Date: 6/12/2013 2:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    hi Mandy yes it seems so, all that soft fluffiness hmmm lol Shadow x