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Above the Clouds

High up here looking down I see shapes all wondrous castles floating like dreams paths leading hither and tither Statues of Mysterious things not seen below the cloud line everywhere you turn and look another little surprise awaits Peace here reigns supreme no wars, Crimes or nightmares look down see people scurrying from place to dreary place Up here above the clouds life has an extra zing to it any fancy you could wish let your imagination run rife Contest: Above The Clouds written 06/12/2013

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Kate Wilderson

Date: 6/17/2013 2:58:00 AM

Nice poem, Shadow, I enjoyed reading it. :)

Kate Wilderson
Date: 6/17/2013 5:26:00 AM

Thanks Shadow, I enjoyed you're poems too. I appreciate the feedback that you gave!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/17/2013 4:32:00 AM

Kate hi ty so much for your time I love your poems Shadow x

Gary Wayne Hill

Date: 6/15/2013 12:21:00 PM

You paint a very pleasant picture with your words, for a few seconds I was there :). Very much enjoyed.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/15/2013 4:19:00 PM

Gary glad it transported you ty for sparing time to read it Shadow x

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 6/13/2013 1:16:00 AM

Lovely my dear,all the best with the contest.

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2013 4:28:00 AM

dearest friend I appreciate your comment and wishes gl to you too love Shadow xox

Nato Calubiran

Date: 6/12/2013 7:45:00 PM

i wish i could have rode a plane so i could feel whats its like to be up in the sky. above in the clouds. Good luck with this entry Shadow

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2013 4:27:00 AM

hi Nato ty I have been up in a glider its another world gl to you Shadow

Donna Jones

Date: 6/12/2013 4:35:00 PM

Very nice......good luck.....:-)

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/13/2013 4:25:00 AM

Donna ty for visiting and luck glad you like it Shadow x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/12/2013 2:56:00 PM

ahhh, yes, it would be so peaceful up there. I remember being "In" a cloud when I was up at the statue of Christ in Rio de Janeiro!! from the streets below it was a cloud but inside it, just not as bright as the rest of the day!

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/12/2013 3:47:00 PM

how lovely it seems wonderful doesn't it. I can remember twice being above the clouds Mt Kilimanjaro as a teenager and Exmoor a few years ago. tnx for stopping in Shadow x

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2013 1:45:00 PM

Great imaginaiton describing life through maybe a hot air balloon, a dandelion seed or being in a glider..Enjoyed floating on the air with you..Your presence at my work was encouraging...Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/12/2013 2:40:00 PM

Sara I love your poems and have added to favs ty for reading mine appreciated Shadow

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/12/2013 1:28:00 PM

sounds idyllic Shadow xx

Shadow Hamilton
Date: 6/12/2013 2:43:00 PM

hi Mandy yes it seems so, all that soft fluffiness hmmm lol Shadow x