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about poetry soup

Why are you always changing
without a map to be found
complicating things
my faith falls down
my comments inbox has up and dissapeared
now I must look through every poem
If your words I wish to hear
Why not just make it prettier,
With bold colors and nice font
Instead you mess with something I've been using
Since I was a child,
Its really frustrating me,
And I wonder if I should stay,
Or like my comments inbox just up and go away.

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  1. Date: 7/25/2014 1:10:00 PM
    this one is cool. I am glad u hung around. I have split up with the soup several times. but like a dog to vomit. I return every gottt damn time. I am still looking for the Dyslexia poem about your dad.

  1. Date: 11/8/2012 12:56:00 AM
    Wow finally someone that feels like I do about the comment box and that oh so needed support that comes with it. Truth be told I also struggle with the same consideration of tossing it all away.

  1. Date: 10/23/2012 11:32:00 AM
    interesting thoughts, about the soup.... it can be frustrating... thank you for sharing... always..pd

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 1:18:00 PM
    Take it easy Jay! We need you! I am alarmed by your comment on my poem, Mercy From The Memory Of Multitudes vanishing???? I cherrish your comments and spirit - if you did not deliberately remove it from my page I would appreciate you recommenting on the piece - I love your impulse - 'faith falls' is sensational - your nervous friend - J.A.B. %

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 8:01:00 AM
    Hullo, Jay. There's no need to leave if you don't want to :D If you haven't already done so, simply click on "My Inbox". There are two headings in there: comments and mail. Hope this helps.