Ablaze

Down where purple Wisteria blooms Love's presence draws nature Setting aflame breathless desire Hearts soften thoughts alter Birds pair, adoring sight fills love's cup Beautiful in love's flight Attentive you become charming Affectionate delight Spring's allure captivating my thoughts So ablaze I love thee Each absorbing thought is of you Admirable yet brawny Sponsor: Francine Roberts Contest: Spring is in the air Written this 28th day of February 2013

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Timothy Hicks

Date: 3/12/2013 10:24:00 AM

Whimsical piece! I adored all the close attention to detail through out and this particular line "Hearts soften thoughts alter"... it really describes the feeling of spring in the air, for me. Where one finds beauty more and thinks just a little less. Delightful poem!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/10/2013 9:14:00 PM

SARA, ~ CONGRATULATIONS in FRANCINE'S lovely "SPRING IS IN THE AIR" contest. have yourself a nice and sweet smile on me...;-) LOL...xox~ PD

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 3/9/2013 4:01:00 PM

Ah Spring, I can't wait Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 3/9/2013 6:36:00 AM

Many Congratulations on your win Sara luv xx

Joseph May

Date: 3/8/2013 6:04:00 PM

congrats on a fine win Sara

Kash Poet

Date: 3/8/2013 3:31:00 PM

Beautiful poetry by you Sara.Congrats on your win.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/8/2013 9:02:00 AM

What a beauty this is!! Congratulations on your win!!! Alive with spring!

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 3/8/2013 8:00:00 AM

Congrats on a supurb write and win. BG

Debra Squyres

Date: 3/8/2013 7:36:00 AM

Love and Spring... walk sweetly hand in hand !! Enjoyed and Congratulations on your win !!

Donna Jones

Date: 3/8/2013 6:18:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win Sara hope you are well. :-)

Francine Roberts

Date: 3/7/2013 11:27:00 PM

congrats on your second place win Sara,its lovely, just lovely

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/7/2013 11:21:00 PM

Happy to share honors with you, Sara. Love, Joyce

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 3/6/2013 2:39:00 PM

nice~Sandy

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 3/2/2013 3:19:00 PM

Hope springs eternal.....you captured that here in this terrific write! Hugs

Jack Horne

Date: 2/28/2013 3:35:00 PM

wow, a truly beautiful write here, Sara - another sure winner

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/28/2013 3:30:00 PM

This is a wonderful and dynamic write my friend! You have presented a tremendous poem! You have put me in awe with the splendor of your incredible piece, Great Work!!

Heather Ober

Date: 2/28/2013 1:37:00 PM

This is the perfect Spring poem, full of innocence and new beginnings. Beautiful descriptions, Sara!

Eileen Manassian

Date: 2/28/2013 12:10:00 PM

Sara....this is so romantic! :) I LOVE PURPLE Wisteria blooms. Hubby and I have a photo with purple blooms framing us. What a delightful write! Hugs!