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Abbotsford Road

I'm swept up in mixed emotions when I walk down Abbotsford Road. They fill my memory-ocean where waves of feeling erode the moments from my childhood when time was an endless stream of games and imagination, of very first hopes and dreams. The trees have grown so tall, as they reach toward the sky. The gardens flourish and sprawl past lilacs that sway and sigh against the backyard gate, which I've pushed a thousand times to watch the apple blossoms fall from trees we used to climb. The house still looks the same, though I know it's changed inside. Someone else is dreaming dreams in the room that once was mine. Written: 2015/09/08 For Verlena's "A child's first home" contest

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Date: 11/4/2015 1:05:00 AM
Very nicely expressed, Heather - Congratulations! Best regards! :-) john
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Date: 10/22/2015 1:20:00 PM
Heather, Congratulations on "A child's first home WIN." **SKAT**
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Date: 10/18/2015 5:12:00 PM
So heartfelt and lovely, Laura. Full of emotion so poetically expressed. Congrats on your fine win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:49:00 AM
PS I made you a favorite poet too!
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Date: 10/18/2015 6:48:00 AM
Oh Heather, I dearly love your beautiful entry filled with colors and sublime imagery. I want to fave this! Congratulations on your well deserved win!
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Date: 9/11/2015 12:32:00 AM
This is beautiful, Heather..."They fill my memory-ocean where waves of feeling erode" Love those delightful lines...and the last two lines are haunting..Always, Laura
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Date: 9/10/2015 9:30:00 PM
wow, this is so beautifully written. You are truly gifted, Heather. I want to write of my old home but I know it will never look like this.
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Date: 9/10/2015 3:16:00 PM
This hit home hard with me I am just selling my parent's home so the final lines are very poignant :-( good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx 7
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Date: 9/9/2015 2:49:00 AM
Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Thanks for sharing it.
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