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Abandoned

Gone D E A D Dust settled deserted Tumbleweeds now control this town... Why did you R U N away Are you coming H O M E someday Why did you S T O P caring Did you F O R G E T about me here? Dark nights N O L I G H T S Desolate and freezing All alone with crickets who chirp... Why do I feel like D Y I N G Why do I deserve this C U R S E I am the I N N O C E N T O N E Me the V I C T I M the D Y I N G SON Daddy P L E A S E Daddy won't you come home... bmdavey@2005

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Date: 1/13/2016 7:22:00 PM
Brian, I'm deeply moved by your poem... SKAT
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Brian Davey
Date: 1/16/2016 12:19:00 AM
Thank you I am phased that it impacted you so much

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