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A Woman's Wrath

During the dark dreary cold winter weather There're times of sunshine and warm rather, Likewise the moods of a woman you can't trust Soft as snowflakes at times or cold hard crust. Hotter than fiercer fire or colder than ice, Happy or sad - Oh, you'll pay the price! Placid or provoked, she carries a punch making the best of us a sore-looking bunch. Do not step out into this raging storm, Crawl under the covers and stay warm, Let the wailing, veering wind pass you by, Just stay put until you see a clear blue sky. You may censure me, you can ostracize, Oh, do review thy lady ere you patronize-- Thus I forewarn the brethren of my ilk, Fall not for fair face and skin soft as silk. ~A Brian Strand Rhyming Contest. "When a woman is just a woman" contest by Justin Bordner.

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Date: 8/10/2021 8:02:00 PM
Abdul, congrats on your fantastic win! Blessings, Kim M
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Abdul Malik
Date: 8/11/2021 7:19:00 AM
Thanks Kim.
Date: 8/10/2021 1:56:00 AM
Likewise the moods of a woman you can't trust - Indeed, very sarcastically put though not very negatively.
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Date: 8/11/2021 7:20:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 12/23/2012 5:56:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win Abdul.
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Date: 12/19/2012 4:28:00 AM
Congratulations on your super win Abdul! love/hugs,LG
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Date: 12/19/2012 2:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your top spot Abdul, I feel honoured to share it with you, this one is superb xx
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/19/2012 2:48:00 PM
Thanks a bunch. You hit the spot too! Have a happy holiday.
Date: 12/19/2012 2:32:00 AM
Congratulations my friend Abdul on your fantastic win. Wishing you a blessed Christmas. Hugs/Love Maria
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/19/2012 2:52:00 PM
Thanks. You too!
Date: 12/18/2012 8:39:00 PM
Abdul, 2 perceived opposite meanings when it comes to "FIRE And ICE" :-) Congratulations with your winning poem In , Carol's contest... goodnight~ PD
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Date: 12/18/2012 7:14:00 PM
Lol women get moody no wzy..... Haha. Seren
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/19/2012 2:52:00 PM
Hey Julia Roberts! Thanks.
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Seren Roberts
Date: 12/18/2012 7:15:00 PM
Sorty forgot to say congratulations.
Date: 12/18/2012 4:35:00 PM
This is an elegant poem on women and their moods. I am not moody at all, but I sure know some women who are! congrats on your fine win.
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Abdul Malik
Date: 12/19/2012 2:51:00 PM
That's great! I thought if you have seen one, you've seen 'em all!! If you are NOT moody, then ... maybe, I need to write a poem on you alone!?
Date: 12/18/2012 1:46:00 PM
Thank you for supporting my contest and congratulations on your placement Abdul. Love, Carol
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