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A Wolf's Tale

One day there was 2 wolves Each wolf was a stray but they played each and every day One loved another together they were the same The wolves grew old but still loved the same game But one day one wolf didnt come back he didnt run away he got himself trapped the wolf got over it but happiness was in lack so the poor lonely wolf stayed grew cold and made his own pack

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2011 10:33:00 AM

I am enjoying reading the many diverse poems written by the many wonderful poets writing and sharing here at PoetrySoup today. I am happy that yours was among the ones I had the pleasure to read Riely. Love, Carol

A Rambling Righting Riley - Shauna Riley

Date: 3/3/2011 5:13:00 AM

I hate when I do this....I comment and forget to RATE it...so here I am rating it.... OH! And I love poems that tell a story....but hidden beneath is a much deeper meaning that what you are actually reading. Reminds me of my One Drop poem...although, no one has yet to really see what I am talking about... Have a great morning!

A Rambling Righting Riley - Shauna Riley

Date: 3/3/2011 5:10:00 AM

Not sure what this poem means....but when I read it....it sounds to me like 2 kids growing up, becoming best of friends. Growing older...I'm think the wolf "got himself trapped" in either a manipulative friendship...or the "trap of woman"...wink wink...friendship faded, wolf eventually got over it but was never the same, became bitter and eventually made their own friends again. I can relate to this in many ways...not sure if this is what you meant, but this is what I got...thanks for sharing!