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A scarlet sun sinks as daylight departs, staining clouds like a thousand bleeding hearts. And the death of day spurs on Night's attack as dusk silently colors the sky black. No matter what you say or how you feel, reality somehow seems surreal. And a rush of tears drowns your heart mid-beat as abandoned dreams crumble in defeat. Disbelief and anger rush to compete as the new moon hides and the stars retreat. And unable to free your heart of dread, it's crushed under the weight of what was said. Rays of a rising sun pierce the night sky fulfilling promise of a whispered lie. But today won't let tomorrow begin when yesterday's shadow lingers within. Your instinct says leave, and yet, you refuse, except for hope; you've nothing more to lose. Invested in a love you felt would last, your future's firmly rooted in the past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/3/2016 4:30:00 AM
Wow, a beautiful but deep and powerful poem, well written Emile
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Date: 3/3/2016 7:45:00 AM
Thanks Gail, I appreciate your comments. Emile.
Date: 3/2/2016 11:22:00 AM
A very powerful piece! Artistically expressed. 7 all the way.
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:12:00 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
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Date: 3/2/2016 1:45:00 PM
Thanks Richard, I truly appreciate your support. Emile.
Date: 3/1/2016 12:46:00 PM
- A deeply touching write, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/12/2016 11:12:00 AM
Please read my last poem, Thank you Emile.
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Date: 3/1/2016 2:21:00 PM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I look forward to your visits. Emile.

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