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A Week With the Girl of My Dreams

I met her Sunday in the park Between our hearts there was a spark We'll have to wait and see If we are each others need Monday rolled around and then A bit of luck we met again I laid on the manly charm Her hands were soft and warm Tuesday came and Tuesday passed Her number I forgot to ask What a fool I was Did I just lose true love Wednesday she somehow found me Standing below my balcony I looked down into her eyes A very pleasant surprise Thursday it was burning love A girl like her more than enough For a man like me She's all that I can see Friday a day like I've never known With cloud nine far down below I am flying high The best day of my life Saturday all I could see The whole of the week was but a dream I woke up Sunday in the park The afternoon sky was cloudy and dark

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Date: 8/25/2016 7:26:00 PM
A charming poem, very sweet sentiments though a sad ending. I like the innocence of your words...the title is what drew me in and I am so glad I stayed.:-) I really enjoyed reading this..great writing :-) blessings, lynn
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Mike Hauser
Date: 8/26/2016 8:08:00 AM
:0) thank you
Date: 8/25/2016 12:42:00 PM
Funny but very sad Mike. I love your style. You have become part of my daily read!
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Mike Hauser
Date: 8/25/2016 12:53:00 PM
Thank you my friend...I'm honored

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