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a weathervane

a weathervane still points east 'pon gray ancient barn... fall's air rust tractors the vain weathervane speaks east and rust grows though no one knows rusty John Deere sits outside engine deep in grass... bucks face off for fight the leaves are falling revealing the trees fractures fall air thrust factors crimson, gold, and red leaves fall farm lake ~ mural of the scene John Deere the artist tractors in the grass like clouds wearing the weather
Rengay Collaboration between Poet # 1 and Poet # 2 Poet # One, 1, 3, 5 Poet # Two...2, 4, 6

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  1. Date: 2/11/2014 4:55:00 PM
    wow congrads to us!!! i had no ideal and this contest i'm sure was judged fairly with no favorites. except her being the favorite of many. so glad to share this with you, you who mean so much. john

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 3:33:00 PM
    So well done, a big congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 1:54:00 PM
    Wow, these read almost like strung together haikus. Great imagery! Congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/11/2014 11:15:00 AM
    Congrats on a fine win Sara

  1. Date: 11/3/2013 10:23:00 PM
    This is a beautiful form Sara, hope you are feeling well...I did not see you on line today... HUGS...lINDA

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 3:55:00 PM
    I think we did alright. The image of the tractor or an old vehicle that remains stationary for years. Like the barn almost built there.

  1. Date: 10/31/2013 7:38:00 AM
    Another awesome great collaboration my friend! You are getting good at writing these collab's Sara! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening poem this morning! What a lovely piece, I would love to read the final product! Excellent Work!!