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A Vision

In midst of Natures bounty I espied Aside a stream, a gilded gleaming cage. Its tenant was a lifeless bird inside. Engrossed in thought in view of deaths image I deemed its death from thirst beside water. Within this cage were two metal basins one filled with food, and of course, the other. It’s like a wealthy man who’s locked within His iron safe, amid his heaps of gold; And perishing inside his house of ease Of hunger pangs and thirst as time unfolds. Then suddenly a bizarre vision seized My weary eyes, the cage became the bones Of Man, the bird, his prisoned heart of stone.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/14/2011 3:34:00 PM
Nice work.
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Albert Ahearn
Date: 3/27/2014 11:32:00 AM
Better late than never, thanks Leo.
Date: 11/14/2011 7:04:00 AM
I like the way this sonnet shifts at the end, the way you take turn at line 12 to lead into the closing. I also like the balance of sentence lengths, it contributes to the overall sense of flow. Thanks, Jim
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Albert Ahearn
Date: 3/27/2014 11:35:00 AM
Better Late than never. Thank you for your kind comment, Jim.

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