Get Your Premium Membership

A Villanelle On the Villanelle - Revised

It has the ringing echo of a bell. The words at each line’s end must reconcile. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. Its quality is like a carousel. Jean Passaerat of France defined its style. It has the ringing echo of a bell. Divinity inside this form may dwell as one defines those things for him worthwhile. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. The message of this form one can foretell. Its poets are to litany servile. It has the ringing echo of a bell. And like the terza rima or rondel, this form through history has had its trial. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. This poetry, if it is authored well, can capture hearts and make the spirit smile. It has the ringing echo of a bell. Oh, how I love the lovely villanelle. For the Villanelle Poetry Contest of Nina Parmenter

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

12
Date: 2/11/2019 11:20:00 PM
Lovely, Andrea. A brilliant take on the challenge. Love it. Congrats on your fine win.
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2019 8:39:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations as well on your placement, a ringing endorsement!!!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/26/2019 5:49:00 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win, Andrea! SUPERB! Janice
Login to Reply
Date: 4/6/2014 5:07:00 AM
Nicely done! Congrats on your victory!!
Login to Reply
Date: 4/4/2014 11:31:00 AM
Hi Andrea...back to you. This is a great write; immensely enjoyed. // congrats on win. // paul
Login to Reply
Date: 4/3/2014 1:21:00 PM
Andrea, loving the poem... awesome to see you on this rhyme battle list... Linda
Login to Reply
Date: 10/23/2012 2:07:00 AM
hey i really like this beauty, Andrea, looking at poems you wrote, while i was resettling back in the uk,, will catch up later....
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2011 7:49:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Catie's "Villanelle Me" contest Andrea. Love, Carol
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 2:13:00 PM
grin...a teaching verse so appropo! Congrad's Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 9:33:00 AM
Congrats!!! Andrea so happy to see this win. loved this wonderful poem done on villanelle itself,today I finally got this much needed break to go through the winning poems,, so many contest results and I've just begun..really loving them all so much,,the classics and Chris' one so lovely..the night is long for me today...sending huggs...
Login to Reply
Date: 6/24/2011 6:29:00 AM
This is terrific and one of the best. Many congrats for this write Andrea.
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 3:21:00 PM
"how I love the lovely villanelle" ..that sounds so cool and fresh, doesn't it Andrea? makes one want to keep saying it. This take on this contest was ingenius. Very well done and congratulations to you. I have learned alot about the villanelle by reading all these great poems today and now I'm finally starting to "love the lovely villanelle..."
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 2:50:00 PM
Many congrats on your win in this contest too, Andrea : ) I never did get round to trying this form - I really must
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 1:17:00 PM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of catie, Andrea
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 9:41:00 AM
Congrats Andrea on your excellent win in the contest with this creative poetic journey and awesome title too..luv..
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 9:36:00 AM
Way to go, Andrea. Congratulations on your win in Catie's contest! Love, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Date: 6/23/2011 8:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your well-deserved placement in Catie's contest. Well done, my friend. Hugs, Licia. xxx
Login to Reply
Date: 6/3/2011 2:30:00 PM
A lovely Villanelle you have penned. I enjoyed the read, best to you in the contest. Caryl
Login to Reply
Date: 5/31/2011 10:14:00 PM
What a clever write of one of the most difficult forms. I'm seriously impressed. This is good poetry, Andrea. GOOD LUCK IN THE CONTEST. ^__^
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2011 9:34:00 AM
a very creative piece of work, enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on Clouds Bursting
Login to Reply
Date: 5/28/2011 3:21:00 AM
A fine piece on the beautiful attributes of a villanelle..it's echoing ringing like a bell...simply loved it..Best wishes for the contest Andrea. huggs, gautami
Login to Reply
Date: 5/26/2011 5:08:00 AM
Very well done. To avoid tedium you have to come up with the right lines...you have done so here in style! Well done, Andrea! Regards, Robert.
Login to Reply
Date: 5/25/2011 12:55:00 PM
This is a style that I have never tried. Great write as always Andrea. love phyl
Login to Reply
Date: 5/22/2011 6:40:00 AM
This is a definition villanelle an oh so echoing of its purpose... like the terza rima or rondel...this poem is oh so swell! Gwendolen
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2011 10:09:00 PM
Bells are ringing in me ears, a winning verse perchance appears, upon it do i dwell! Don Johnson i do remain, not Miami vice of acclaim, but im on the yu ing tube, brash n rash n sometimes rude, love Don http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uJ05cdRHVDk&feature=related
Login to Reply
12

Book: Shattered Sighs