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deep red crepe myrtles standing alert in the wind their harmonies blend as petals drift down like snow on to the green plants that grow red roses aglow beside the walkway still grow with one yellow rose standing alone on its toes beside rubber water hose looking on the side cedar trees stand tall with pride small animals hide dogwood and pecans abide grass high need lawnmower to ride! by Marty Owens For Francine Roberts contest "the view - a tanka" 9/08/11

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Date: 10/7/2011 10:49:00 AM
Enjoyed reading your descriptive work..This expressive write reads like winning material to me..Good luck in Francine's contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and taking time to write a review or my work..Sara
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Date: 9/8/2011 11:01:00 PM
a magnificent view Marty luv and wonderful visuals in this entire piece ..good luck in the contest..
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Date: 9/8/2011 3:30:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today Marty. Love, Carol
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